《冬之韵》

文/任泳儒（新疆哈密）

西风烈长空雁叫霜晨月

赶走了大雁南飞去的悲鸣

姹紫嫣红的深秋

被一场雨加雪吞噬苍穹纠缠不清

一朵朵雪花纷扬着洁白的羽翼

斜织着如天使般纯美降落人间

擦肩而过覆盖苍莽

遮月挡住尘埃落定之后冻结的冬韵妆点着深意轮回

雪花张开了翅膀

扇动压抑的胸怀天下

酝酿飞蛾扑火般的笃定

她深情的轻轻地吻了我的眼眸

滑过我的脸颊

像母亲的温情融化在我的心窝

默然净度无声的奉献

飘来圣洁却听不到她珊珊而来的声响

浓秋的艳色绝美谢了花红

雪花暄妍她的纷纷扬扬

静谧了冬天的韵致

盛开与衰败

是生命里途中的轮回所见

一昼程一夜程绕山转水

唯那凛冽夜空的寒风牵引

迎来一场雪的洁白牵伴

雾淞妆扮了冬天冰清玉洁的模样

走在寂寥的夜晚路灯闪烁之光

静听踩雪回声的吱吱声

律动向前行走的步伐坚定自信

似曾追风的人用韵致的回声

在追赶季节的脚步迈向苍莽

一场雪的寒光逼近

让我懂得了夏日的温暖已失去

灯火阑珊处仍有一盏灯为谁守候

静静地亮在生命的雪夜里等待

想起小时候父母在

炉火旺的温暖火热

也温情着我生命里的寒冬与难忘的背影

一场雪牵来冬的韵苑

我用清新的氤氲之息凝聚力量

宣读冬的序言谱写冬雪别恋过往的新篇章

我踩着冬的吱嘎的韵律

走在旷野之息寂寥一片空静的光芒

看那傲雪的风骨梅雪交融情真意切的坚守

任一场雪驰骋纵横草原皑皑辽远

一个洁白的信念让我书写思念的滋味来开启一个崭新的春天

冬之韵的芳菲艳影芳心的圣洁

雪与梅的傲骨无双的清澈见底…

那山那水那云那雪

那人那屋那情那梦

就在眼前一亮

梦里跳动的心在呐喊

二0二五年十二月十六日於哈密

The Rhythm of Winter

By Ren Yongru (Hami, Xinjiang)

Wild west wind howls across the vault of heaven;

Wild geese cry beneath the frosty morning moon.

It chases away the mournful honks of geese flying south,

Swallowing the resplendent autumn in a tangled mix of rain and snow.

Flakes of snow drift down, unfurling their pure white wings,

Weaving slantwise through the air, descending like angels to the mortal world.

Brushing past, they blanket the vast wilderness,

Veiling the moon and blocking the dust. When all settles and freezes,

The rhythm of winter adorns the world with profound, cyclical meaning.

Snowflakes spread their wings,

Unfolding a heart that holds the whole universe.

Brewing the resolute determination of a moth darting into the flame,

They gently kiss my eyes with deep affection,

Sliding down my cheeks—

As tender as a mother’s love, melting into the depths of my heart.

Silently, they cleanse and redeem the world with quiet devotion.

Bringing holiness in their wake, yet without a sound of their graceful approach.

The stunning hues of late autumn fade, their blossoms wilting away,

While snowflakes bloom in all their swirling glory,

Hushing the world into the unique charm of winter.

Blossoming and withering—

These are the cycles witnessed along the journey of life.

Days pass and nights turn, as I wander past mountains and rivers.

Only the biting cold wind in the wintry sky guides me,

Welcoming the companionship of a blanket of pure white snow.

Rime adorns winter in its icy elegance,

As I walk through the quiet night beneath the flickering streetlights.

Listening to the crisp crunch of snow underfoot,

My steps move forward in steady, confident rhythm.

Like one who once chased the wind, I follow the echoes of winter’s charm,

Hurrying to keep pace with the seasons as they march toward the boundless wilderness.

The cold glow of the snow draws near,

Making me realize that the warmth of summer is gone.

Yet in the dim light of fading lanterns, a single lamp still burns—

Who is it waiting for,

Shining quietly in the snowy night of life, holding vigil?

I think back to my childhood, when my parents were still around,

The stove blazing with warm, crackling fire.

That warmth lingers still, comforting me through the cold winters of life

And the unforgettable sight of their departing figures.

A snowfall ushers in winter’s garden of charm.

I gather my strength from the crisp, misty air,

Reciting the prologue of winter, composing a new chapter of love

That bids farewell to the past amid the snow.

I tread to the crunching rhythm of winter,

Walking through the boundless wilderness bathed in a serene, empty glow.

Watching the unyielding spirit of plum blossoms standing proudly in the snow,

Their love a sincere and steadfast bond.

Let the snow sweep freely across the vast, snow-covered grasslands.

A pure white belief stirs within me,

As I pour out my longing to usher in a brand-new spring.

The fragrant beauty of winter’s rhythm, the holiness of a pure heart,

The peerless elegance of snow and plum blossoms, clear and transparent as crystal…

Those mountains, those rivers, those clouds, that snow—

Those people, those houses, those feelings, those dreams—

All come vividly into view in a sudden flash of light.

My heart, beating wildly in my dreams, cries out aloud.

Written in Hami on December 16, 2025

      🎋🌹🌹作家简介🌹🌹🎋

任忠富，笔名任泳儒，新疆哈密巴里坤县人，退伍军人，中共党员，爱好文学。人民文艺协会诗人作家，世界汉语作家协会终身签约诗人，世界作家澜韵府诗社总顾问，一枝红莲文学诗社、世界作家澜韵府诗社签约作家诗人 。现任华夏诗词文学社总监，官方《诗韵星光访谈》主编（百度、腾讯、搜狐、今日头条编辑 ）。创作成果:2021年3月，合集出版红船精神相关著作《南湖》，该书已被当代国学馆收藏 。曾在《哈密广播电视报》《哈密垦区开发报》《哈密报》、哈密广播电视台等多家媒体发表散文、散文诗、诗歌等多篇作品，多次被评为优秀通讯员 。系《中国爱情诗刊》《中国爱情诗社》《伊州韵文艺》《蒲公英诗苑》《江南诗絮》《中国人民诗刊》《中国人民诗社》《花瓣雨文化工作室》《海峡文学》等平台在线诗人，且曾多次合集出书、在多家纸刊发表作品 。

🌷🌷Writer's Profile🌷🌷

Ren Zhongfu, pen - named Ren Yongru, is from Barkol County, Hami, Xinjiang. He is a veteran, a member of the Communist Party of China, and loves literature.

He is a poet and writer of the People's Literature and Art Association, a lifelong contracted poet of the World Chinese Writers Association, the general consultant of the Lanyunfu Poetry Society of World Writers, and a contracted writer and poet of the Yizhi Honglian Literature Poetry Society and the Lanyunfu Poetry Society of World Writers. He is currently the director of the Huaxia Poetry and Ci Literature Society and the chief editor of the official Poetry Rhythm Starlight Interview (editor of Baidu, Tencent, Sohu, and Toutiao).

Creative Achievements

- In March 2021, he co - published the book South Lake related to the Red Boat Spirit, and this book has been collected by the Contemporary Sinology Museum.

- He has published many prose, prose poems, poems and other works in many media such as Hami Radio and Television Newspaper, Hami Reclamation Area Development Newspaper, Hami Newspaper, and Hami Radio and Television Station, and has been rated as an excellent correspondent for many times.

- He is an online poet of platforms such as Chinese Love Poetry Journal, Chinese Love Poetry Society, Yizhou Rhyme Literature and Art, Dandelion Poetry Garden, Jiangnan Poetry Fluff, Chinese People's Poetry Journal, Chinese People's Poetry Society, Petal Rain Cultural Studio, Straits Literature, etc. He has also co - published books for many times and published works in many paper - based journals.

雪涌天山笔卷洪荒——任泳儒《冬之韵》的生命气象与诗性乾坤

         点评词作者/柴永红

西域的朔风漫过天山褶皱，巴里坤的雪絮吻遍戈壁苍茫，一首裹挟着塞北风骨与赤子柔情的《冬之韵》，便在任泳儒的笔端轰然绽放。是一部饱蘸着生命哲思、乡土情怀与天地精神的恢弘交响。以雪为媒，以冬为笺，将西北大地的凛冽与温热、自然轮回的苍茫与精微、人生旅途的回望与前行，熔铸成一道穿透岁月的光，照亮了诗歌的疆域，也照亮了每个读者心中关于季节、关于家园、关于生命的永恒回响。

作为扎根新疆哈密的诗人，任泳儒的笔触天生带着戈壁与雪山的气息——粗粝、雄浑，却又藏着极致的温柔。《冬之韵》的开篇便破空而来，带着一股横扫千军的气势：“西风烈长空雁叫霜晨月，赶走了大雁南飞去的悲鸣”。一个“烈”字，劈开了天地的混沌，让凛冽的西风跃然纸上；雁鸣与霜月相映，勾勒出深秋退场的苍凉图景，而“雨加雪吞噬苍穹”的磅礴笔触，更是将季节更迭的力量感写到极致。当姹紫嫣红的秋光被风雪席卷，天地间只剩下一片苍茫的白，诗人笔锋一转，赋予雪花以神性的光辉：“一朵朵雪花纷扬着洁白的羽翼，斜织着如天使般纯美降落人间”。此处的雪，不再是自然的物象，而是带着使命的使者，是涤荡尘埃的精灵，是妆点轮回的丹青妙手。“擦肩而过覆盖苍莽”，遮月挡尘的静默中，完成了季节的交接，也完成了一场关于“冬韵”的盛大加冕。

如果说诗歌的开篇是天地的史诗，那么接下来的篇章，便是诗人与雪的对话，是灵魂与自然的相拥。“雪花张开了翅膀，扇动压抑的胸怀天下”，这是何等壮阔的想象！雪花本是轻盈之物，诗人眼中，却有着吞吐天地的气魄，有着“飞蛾扑火般的笃定”。这份笃定，是雪落大地的义无反顾，是生命奔赴使命的赤诚决绝。而当雪花“深情的轻轻地吻了我的眼眸，滑过我的脸颊”，磅礴的天地气象骤然收敛，化作一缕温润的柔情——“像母亲的温情融化在我的心窝”。这一笔，堪称神来之笔。将雪的圣洁与母爱的温暖无缝衔接，让冰冷的雪花有了温度，苍茫的冬天有了归宿。诗人的笔下，雪不再是遥不可及的自然景观，而是可以触摸的亲情，是可以依偎的怀抱，是默然奉献的生命图腾。“飘来圣洁却听不到她珊珊而来的声响”，以无声的姿态，涤荡着深秋的艳色，也涤荡着人们心中的浮躁与尘埃。

《冬之韵》的动人之处，从未止步于写景抒情的浅滩，而是向着生命哲思的深海泅渡。“盛开与衰败，是生命里途中的轮回所见”，这一句如洪钟大吕，道破了自然与人生的终极密码。冬雪的降临，不是衰败的终结，而是新生的序曲；深秋的退场，不是繁华的湮灭，而是轮回的开端。诗人以“一昼程一夜程绕山转水”的行旅意象，书写着生命的跋涉，而那“凛冽夜空的寒风”，既是前行的阻力，也是引路的明灯。当雾凇妆扮出冬天“冰清玉洁的模样”，当路灯的光芒洒在寂寥的雪夜，当踩雪的“吱吱声”与坚定的步伐共鸣，诗人笔下的冬，便有了一种昂扬向上的力量。这不是消极避世的冬夜独酌，而是踏雪而行的生命宣言——“似曾追风的人用韵致的回声，追赶季节的脚步迈向苍莽”。此处的“苍莽”，既是西北大地的辽阔疆域，也是生命追求的无垠远方。

如果说自然的轮回与生命的跋涉，构成了《冬之韵》的骨骼，那么乡愁与亲情，便是这首诗的血脉。当“一场雪的寒光逼近”，夏日的温暖成为遥远的记忆，诗人的笔锋便转向了灯火阑珊处的守候，转向了童年记忆里的炉火。“想起小时候父母在，炉火旺的温暖火热，也温情着我生命里的寒冬与难忘的背影”，这几句朴素的文字，没有华丽的辞藻，却有着直抵人心的力量。在西域的凛冽寒风中，父母的背影与炉火的温暖，是诗人一生的精神坐标；在苍茫的雪夜里，这份温暖化作一盏不灭的灯，照亮了生命的来路与归途。这是属于诗人的私人记忆，也是属于每个游子的集体乡愁——无论走多远，无论风雪多大，总有一盏灯，在故乡的窗前，为我们亮着。

诗歌的后半部分，意境愈发开阔，情感愈发炽烈。“一场雪牵来冬的韵苑，我用清新的氤氲之息凝聚力量”，诗人以雪为墨，以冬为纸，书写着对过往的告别，对未来的期许。他“踩着冬的吱嘎的韵律”，行走在旷野的空静光芒里，看“傲雪的风骨梅雪交融情真意切的坚守”。梅与雪，是中国古典诗词中永恒的意象，而在任泳儒的笔下，这对意象被赋予了新的内涵——不再是江南园林的婉约点缀，而是西北大地的风骨象征。梅的坚韧，雪的纯洁，诗人的眼中，是生命最本真的模样，是“无双的清澈见底”。当雪“驰骋纵横草原皑皑辽远”，诗人心中的“洁白的信念”便化作一股磅礴的力量，“书写思念的滋味来开启一个崭新的春天”。此处的春天，不再是季节的概念，而是生命的新生，是希望的象征，是历经寒冬之后的豁然开朗。

诗歌的结尾，如一曲雄浑的合唱，将天地万物、人间情愫熔于一炉：“那山那水那云那雪，那人那屋那情那梦，就在眼前一亮，梦里跳动的心在呐喊”。这不是简单的景物罗列，而是诗人心中的精神原乡。山是天山的巍峨，水是哈密的清澈，雪是巴里坤的纯洁，人是故乡的亲人，情是血脉的羁绊，梦是生命的向往。这些意象交织在一起，构成了一幅立体的、鲜活的、充满生命力的画卷。而“梦里跳动的心在呐喊”，则将整首诗的情感推向了高潮——这是对故乡的热爱，对生命的礼赞，对未来的呼唤，是一个扎根西北的诗人，对这片土地最深情的告白。

纵观全诗，《冬之韵》有着与众不同的艺术特质。大气磅礴，源于诗人对西北大地的深刻理解与热爱。没有对天山风雪的亲身体验，便写不出“西风烈”的雄浑；没有对戈壁苍茫的深情凝望，便写不出雪“驰骋纵横草原”的壮阔。与众不同，源于诗人将豪放与婉约、写景与抒情、哲思与乡愁完美融合的笔力。有“吞噬苍穹”的磅礴气势，也有“母亲的温情”的细腻动人；有“生命轮回”的深刻哲思，也有“炉火温暖”的朴素乡愁。诗性乾坤，源于诗人以小见大的艺术匠心——以雪花为切入点，写尽了天地的壮阔；以冬韵为线索，写尽了生命的丰盈。

作为一名退伍军人、一名扎根基层的作家，任泳儒的诗歌始终带着一种责任与担当。他的文字，不是象牙塔里的风花雪月，而是来自大地深处的声音。《冬之韵》不仅是一首关于冬天的诗，更是一首关于生命的诗，一首关于故乡的诗，一首关于精神的诗。我们看到，凛冽的寒冬里，藏着最温暖的希望；苍茫的天地间，藏着最动人的深情；平凡的生命中，藏着最磅礴的力量。

西域的风雪再次漫过天山，巴里坤的炉火再次点亮冬夜，我们依然会想起这首《冬之韵》。如同一座丰碑，矗立在诗歌的原野上，告诉我们：真正的诗歌，永远扎根于大地，永远流淌着血脉，永远闪耀着人性的光辉。是西北大地的雪，是天山深处的风，是每个游子心中，那盏永不熄灭的灯。